I would love to start this book however this would be my second book by this author and neither of them are completed he just stopped updating Amazing stories that I don't mind paying for until I don't get an ending very disappointing 😒
I feel like the Character is too mature and emotionless for his age. The MC is a traverser a kid even before dying but suddenly he got all adult-like I can't tell it because of a system and he was blind his whole life for god sake after getting his eyes it's a totally new life to him where I found his lack of emotion and soon acceptance which is weird in reader point of I feel like I reading about a bot no even worse. I just can't imagine the character which defeats the whole purpose of my reading experience. This story had a lot of potential but failed to be true. I always felt like Urban-Harem stories carry a lack of common sense and this strengthened the point.Just choose on Heroine and try to develop a story with it which enhance the emotional side of the story provides whole new dynamic for the story.
Writing quality is pretty good and stable. Just need more strength in writing and a little correction on using Punctuation marks.Over all, work is potential. Use more spaces while writing. Keep fighting ❤️
Love love love!!! There have been a few other returner novels that have been written of a similar quality but either writers block or real life issues have led the writters to leaving the novels dropped or in hiatus without warning or explanation. I hope and pray this novel gets its chance to grow and shine as I desperately want to learn more about Ortus and this new world!
its start with a good story good hero good Developing till ch 210 when he let athena slaps him and he do nothing and then he let her to live . and then she betrayed him 2 the developing after he destroyed the city its not that much i am in ch 306 and I'll leave this novel caus I'm Disappointed
The three went to the cafeteria and had their lunch. Arthur never mentioned anything to them and decided to learn more before informing both her sister and friend. For the whole week Arthur made intervals to read the book and study, however, before he could finish the book it seems it has missing pages. Although there were no pages that were forcefully removed. The next day he waited for Carl in the same place and spot inside the library. He waited for 15 minutes and almost planned to leave but Carl came looking exhausted and tired from lack of sleep.
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