The Definition of Time

Great new concept that hasn't really been done before. Excited to see where it goes.The story great main cast of characters. Fans of Hunter x Hunter or great stories in genral will enjoy.

1.4star for writing ,little grammatical mistakes. 2.4star Nothing much to see for development in 10 chapters3.1star Here comes the system, reading every line is so painful that I have equipped myself with large what ofH2O4..4star fine5.4stars Ever watch the show The Boys, it's 70℅same

As always, Don offer us a well written novel with his familiar and excellent prose.The isekai genre may be a bit saturated recently, the take of Don is still fascinating, especially with a female lead for a change.I write this review at the beginning of this novel but I still except great tings to come!Maybe a second review when the 100th chapter lends? Probably.But as always, great work Don!Please continue to charm us with your magic.

<p>"Aku mengerti." Qin Wentian mengangguk.</p>

" tok tok tok tok "

No plano 1-A, Uma figura humanoide sem face, Ou sombra está de frente para um humano conhecido como Klinton.

I know this is the last chance for us to meet.

"Of course so that I could choose a girlfriend for you, between those girls

But the meteor men beg to differ

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

This story has potential to be great. The world building is better than most stories on this app while leaving some questions about the true nature of the world. However, I am pretty disappointed in the free chapters of the story. There was too much exposition in places where it was inappropriate, such as right before or after battles. The size of chapters are pretty short too, which means the majority of the chapter is filled with lots of information that doesn’t really matter at the moment. The author had a chance to show us the world that awakeners enter, showing us struggle, mistakes, and ultimately triumph. Instead we get two fights with some slimes and then a couple more monsters are quickly killed of screen before he goes back home. I get that the first volume was supposed to be slow, but it felt like almost nothing important happened. We still know nothing of his skills or talent. I can’t see myself coming back to spend money on this story if it stays like this.

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?