The Debt Of Fate

"Where other men blindly follow the truth, remember that nothing is true. Where other men are limited by movies or magazines, remember that the feel is the only answer. We work in the dark to search for the light. We are ass~assins."

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All that glitters is gold

Silence!Absolute silence! The crowd first focused on Mu Rong Ying who was struggling to get up from the ground, before they turned their shocked expressions towards Jiang Chen.

Stumbling upon the house, he remembers a story that stubbornly stuck in his head, told by a man who eats burned chicken in bonfire night.

I’m surprised that this is actually very good.At first when I read the synopsis I almost dropped it instantly because of the “and accidentally obtained the immortal cultivation heritage” part, I thought it was a super OP heritage but it was actually just a Qi Cultivator’s heritage, which is good.Now let’s talk about the Cheat, unlike the Check-in System that literally rewards the MC with super OP things for doing nothing the Achievement System of this novel rewards the efforts of the MC,the System sends him a mission and he has to complete it first before receiving the next one.The rewards that the System gives him are related to the achievement that he completed:-The Mc turned 100 years cultivating? =A fruit that increases longevity by 60 years-The MC attempted to break a bottleneck 100 times = A chance to immediately break a bottleneck, either a minor one from 8 to 9 or a major one from Qi to Foundation Establishment.-The Mc cast a spell 100 times = A jade that allows him to perfectly master a spell of the Mc’s choice.Mc Jiang Chengxuan was in this world for more than 100 years before getting the system so he has a cautious personality, he is already an experienced man, now that he has a system he’s still cautious as most of the quests he’s received don’t require him to put himself in danger (for now).So far the MC has made very logical decisions, no young master has appeared and the supporting characters seem very intelligent, they don’t unnecessarily seek trouble with others as if they were parodies of human beings.Although there are only 19 chapters so far so they may appear later.The translation is also very good, they don’t change the gender of the characters in each paragraph.In conclusion, this has a lot of potential.

I normally don't give reviews to translations, but I am compelled to tell that this NBA fanfic translations is perhaps the only honored one, when it comes to NBA fanfiction.The goat Bloodrunk not only emits out a lot of the usual stuff you generally see in CN fics, but also adds their own spin, like TNT, explanations on in-game terminology, and really funny trash-talking. There is much more, but I mainly focus on these few points which not only adds depth to the original story, but really elevates the story as something unique.Yes, it does become cliche that the MC, Han Sen wins majority of the time, or uses foreknowledge to benefit himself, or really just continues to rage bait into oblivion, but this is part of the identity that the novel evokes. The only issue? Waiting for more chapters. I can wait so long as the good. But honestly, I blitzed this in 2 days, and woke up the next morning just to read this till my phone died. TLDR: just faking read it.

Gloom Domain" seems like it could really scratch that itch for fantasy fans looking for an entertaining, character-driven story. I'd definitely be intrigued to give it a read and see how young Jacob Skylar rises to the challenge. Heck, count me in as one of those readers ready to support the author and add this book to my collection!

very uninteresting  very misleading  very click baiting. Again another author who doesnot understand people click on your novel due to the title and synopsis. Sucessful bait but poor execution of story. No reader will wait for 57 chapter for something interesting to happen.For example you go into a restaurant and order food and for the first 15 min they serve you bland stuff , will you wait for them to keep bringing stuff and hoping to see the food get better?? No, you will just leave there and look for a better one.