The Day The Sky Fell

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After writing 300 chapters I figured it was time for my shameless author review.The beginning starts off fairly slow, and the MC is not blessed with world breaking powers from the start, and gets through everything like a breeze. So if you were looking for an MC that is perfect with no flaws and always does everything right this is not the story for you. Also, the MC is able to take multiple forms through the story and spends some of it in the form of a girl. If that is a deal breaker for you, sorry but this is my story and I already wrote it.Now if none of these things bother you, than I personally like the story and think it is worth a read.It is full of plenty of action, adventurer, fun times, and even a bit of romance later on in the story.Lastly, if you enjoy the story, thank you for reading, I never thought it would come this far.

The concept of the story is nice, something that is not very common but is still intriguing and can catch the reader's curiosity and interest. The writing quality is also good and quite descriptive. My only concern is that since this is an action genre, I wish you had given an early demonstration of how music will be used in action... Is this gonna be something like the anime 'Takt Op. Destiny' ?... If you have seen that already.