While increasing my country population, I have to focus on the safety and welfare of my citizens. That's why I have to create a special department exclusive for the law enactments in my country. My country will following 4 national principal's;
When we all finished, Uncle Marcus picked me up and placed me on his shoulders before going to the chief of the village. On the way there, he stopped at almost every place and introduced me to the people. I lost all their names from him telling me practically everyone's name and what they do. where they work. and their hobbies. I was thankful when we reached the chiefs building, which was more like a big house.
Shaking her head to stop thinking about food, she then looked closely at the armoured people riding the Griffins. These people wore shiny armour with a crest on their chest. They were all carrying lances or swords and looked serious. Although they were quite high in the air, Shiro could see their expressions quite clearly, they seemed to be a bit worried about something...
The Mystery Man seemed to think about it for a minute. "As badly as I would like to teach you a lesson in manners, I respect your father enough to want to spare his little princess, although I only know him by reputation and not personally." Changing the subject and addressee abruptly, he said to Dongkun Edda, "No need to concern yourself, *She* will handle it!"
everything was pretty good since I love scheming protagonists, the way he built his empire was explained, the way he used his technology knowledge, and really I liked the way the author built his story but then, this Ricky guy was introduced when it's completely unnecessary, and then instead of getting rid of him, the author drags out the matter involving him, like how? the MC has AIs capable of spying,detecting, hacking anything on earth at that point, they control the satellite outside the orbit but couldn't catch the rebels, and then the story drags out again, the Ricky guy acts as if the MC is his nemesis and all while the MC doesn't even know him, I mean he appeared out of nowhere with his goal of eradicating the devil, dear respected author, do you know that we readers ( well most of us) hate it when the story keep getting dragged out unnecessarily ?like every time the MC gets an update, and goes into a coma, something happens that he'll have to resolve when he wakes up, the ai ends up being completely useless at the moment, and it has happened 2 times already.I think it's because Mr author is making more challenges for the MC or he wants to make the Ricky guy a major antagonist but he's the author so he knows his story more than me.i just wanted to point out a few things that's all. otherwise the story is pretty good and maybe I'm just impatient.and also thanks for all the hardwork mister author!
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