Just read chapter 1 and I can tell you that this novel will be great. I always love this types of novel. Please don’t disappoint me🙏🙏🙏...............................................Why do I have to write more than I should 😡
A good story, that *actually* feels like a proper novel. The system also isn't randomly provided for no reason, but is something the original owner of the body already had, through a family heirloom (likely the product of an evil god). The world background is interesting, with a 'church' that is fundamentally anti-theist. It's also not the kind of novel where all the women are thirsting for the MC (particularly because he's 10 right now) - the playboy is his mentor. The constant refrain of 'little boy' is a bit annoying though - you couldn't translate that differently? Anyway, so far it's solid, definitely better than most novels posted on this site. Hope it gets picked.
I like the Author's writing style, the storyline is not the same as what readers usually read .This one is the best novel I have read so far. Keep up the great work, Author.
I will rate you give stats for this one.The start alone was able to capture my attention.At least it has a better start than the God level mage.Moreover, the character uses the lightning element. One of my best elements.Great work.Can't wait to see how it will go!
Although he knows the location from the original story, he still needs to ask, since there's a possibility she would see him as a creep stalking her into her house.
Jazmin walked into the living room holding a jacket and her wristlet. Walking up to Tristan, standing by the door way. Shrugging he opened the door for her. "She said she was going to leave and that she would text you later." nodding Jazmin turned around and locked the front door walking behind Tristan as they both walked to his car. Settling inside, a whiff of his cologne filled her senses calming her nerves as they drove out of her driveway. The silence filled the air, leaving them comfortably in their own minds. "A door, what comes to mind when you think about it?" Jazmin looked at him curiously trying to think about the question "A door? I guess just any random door that we see everywhere. Why? Is there something else that should come to mind for a door?" Tristan smiled with a small shake of his head "No, haha don't worry. It was just one of those ice breaker questions." Jazmin laughed a bit with him still curious as to why he had asked that.
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