The word Cliché is an understatement for this fast as* plot, come on, put some depth into your novel, the only thing that's keeping your novel from being the same as MTL is the decent English, you could have put some time to add depth into your novel, your novels feels like a copy and paste of typical URBAN Chinese novel with the author having patience of a 5 year old, and imagination of a person under a rock, just by having 1 love interest you separate from the other urban novels, by having patience and making it so that he spends his money in a smart way would make your better than others, and by making his system point is converted by spending money with a ratio of 1:10000 and by having plans & goals you will have something to look forward to.
How do you end the story right before the big bad guy??? Why is it cut so abruptly short? Who is the big bad guy? What are the gods doing adjusting to human life? Do they ever fight the big bad guy or did they earth gaurdian just want some pretty goddess on earth....
Asha was so excited to start the day, not because it's the first day of freshmen year if college, but because her best friend Hana was attending the same college as she was.
Una vez en mi habitación el hombre gordo que al parecer es mi padre le pide al tal Géiser que me examiné, al parecer el viejo moribundo es un doctor, lo que mas me sorprende es que no utilizo herramientas medicas si no que de sus manos disparo una luz extraña a mi cuerpo luego de un cántico extraño, al parecer la magia existe en este extraño mundo que diablos sera que yo puedo se algún tipo de mago también.
Popular Reviews