author please update I beg you please update regularly ur novels is one of the best novel please I want see it ending . I hope u can keep updating this novel
There are a lot of things I don't like about this novel. But there have been many incidents up to where I read it. I wonder how the author will wrap up the life of the Protagonist and make it last. So I don't want to drop it.
Truthfully The writing quality is bad. Since the author is writing only as a hobby I won't be too harsh. The plot isn't good it contains a few plotholes and since writing quality is bad it's hard to sometimes make out what the author wants to say.
Character description is subpar.
No updates stability since the author writes when he has time.
World Background - Other than a general overview it's blank I would say.
And author doesn't read the comments so don't put an effort to mention typos.
please dont drop it, i like the story so far. but there is no ch. R-18 yet, so i hope you make it. like the MC with his slave or any other woman, just make the MC playing punisment game, shower together, some touching while sleeping together. just make some innocent move please.
Author, I honestly have no words as to how much I enjoy your writing. Simply seeing the fact that a new chapter is updated fills me with joy, knowing that for at least a few minutes I'll enjoy myself. And when I see that I am all caught up and there are no new chapters, I'm filled with a bit of loss due to the fact that I don't know what to read. I truly enjoy your amazing work and look forward to even more to come!
good storryyyyyy mannn,thee mc develops relationship with the girls first then bang them,not like some novels mc just a sec later born from his mother and womb he magical grows 9 inch dick and kalal sharingan and all that, KEPPP UP THE HOOD WORK MAN , as a man of culture we support ******, netori, harem heheh,but pelz bro dont add lesbian or yuri content just saying my opinion only, and dooo a masss release....
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Character description is subpar.
No updates stability since the author writes when he has time.
World Background - Other than a general overview it's blank I would say.
And author doesn't read the comments so don't put an effort to mention typos.
The heroines in this novel are realistic since they don’t instantly fall in love with him, and they act like normal girls.
That’s all I wanted to say. Bye.
-From the number 1 fan of this novel. (Literally)
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