The Conquerors Path

Everything is good so far, I say so far since there wasn’t enough chaps to actually judge it good. I just wanna give ideas, don’t make the mother be a very easy capture, he is still her son, she took care of him since he was a child so there is bound to be complications when he abruptly changes his view on her, just take it slow. The big sister, perfect, couldn’t have done that better, lil sis, perfect, reminds me of ‘Little rascal doesn’t want to meet a bad end’.

Make him do exercise early on, but not to the level where after a year timeskip, he can destroy mountains, that’s stupid, just enough to get him going.

Don’t make this guy rely on his system all the time, since you wrote that he is a straight A student then he should be pretty smart, and people who are good at chess are very good at tactics and split second decision making so you can make use of that.

When he starts his first se.x scene, take advantage of the fact that he has watch a lot of **** and hentai that he knows how to pleasure women even though he is a virgin, I already tried that, and I was glad I spent a couple of hours watching po.rn and hen.tai.

Don’t let him be a pushover, It’s kinda weird being a harem protagonist while you’re being dominated in bed.

100 chaps is too long for a se.x scene, just do timeskip dude.

I love this novel. Story, characters, setting etc are entertaining and plot moves at a good pace. I see comments about Author allegedly plagiarizing some others words. Frankly I did not notice any of that. Perhaps author can comment about being inspired by the various sources and encourage readers to check out the source work.

Author san, please do not let this stop you from continuing your work. We are looking forward to see how this story ends and how protagonist keeps harem all together ultimately.

I really liked this novel ..don't drop it author .. some say whatever they want  about the novel but it is one the best stories with good characters ..do keep up the good work

It is an amazing work, sure the author has made mistakes but that is part of being human and he fixed them and apologized, ignore the self-righteous salty whiners who act as if they haven't messed up before and continue to beat a dead horse. They only decided to complain in the reviews after it was put back up(after fixing the mistakes), showing signs of cancel culture which I am sure most people are sick of.

leaving this, I do not like the systems or gods that tell you what to do or punish you, basically a slave ..............................................................

Dear Writer, please continue this masterpiece
Dear Writer, please continue this masterpiece
Dear Writer, please continue this masterpiece
Dear Writer, please continue this masterpiece
Dear Writer, please continue this masterpiece
Dear Writer, please continue this masterpiece

goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood start goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

good potential to be a masterpiece.
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