The plot is good you introduced a lot within 7 chapters although it's not much try to update chapters like 3 chapters a week that will be much faster for you to get the plot somewhere that we the readers could understand but the characters are well written you can understand their ego and emotion i really enjoyed your work i hope you don't stop there cause i would like to see what's gonna happen with logan
Since its only 7 chapters there isn't much of the world building although it's a unique and refreshing storyline that you got i especially liked how you describe your creatures its well detailed and vivid im looking forward to what your gonna do to the story
I really enjoyed the first chapter its kind of new style to the other i have read before keep up the good work i hope you don't stop with your work cause i kind of want to know what will happen in the next chapter
since its my first ever book i will try my best to do a good job in giving the best book that you'll read i would also appreciate if you add it to you library thank you
I really enjoyed the novel, since its only in the beginning with 5 chapters prior to this review, I can't say much about the story. But I do like the premisse of how things worked. A mysterious book that will shape de MC decisions and its full of question too, which is good for us reader.
If you enjoy good descriptions and mysteries, give this novel a try!
Really interesting story. The synopsis did feel a little lacking but I loved the vivid imagery the author created in this story.
The plot seems quite good so far despite it only being two chapter. I want to know more, especially how the codex book works. Can't wait to see more chapters published.
I can tell the author has a good sense of prose and narrative pacing. The technical side of this is good and has few errors. The reading is slightly inhibited by symbol use, but that is more an aspect of WN not providing basic tools like italics and bolding to new writers. That can be corrected in time.
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If you enjoy good descriptions and mysteries, give this novel a try!
The plot seems quite good so far despite it only being two chapter. I want to know more, especially how the codex book works. Can't wait to see more chapters published.
I can tell the author has a good sense of prose and narrative pacing. The technical side of this is good and has few errors. The reading is slightly inhibited by symbol use, but that is more an aspect of WN not providing basic tools like italics and bolding to new writers. That can be corrected in time.
Overall, a decent start.