The writing at the start was, if I can be frank, horrible. I almost dropped it after seeing the numerous misspellings and grammatical issues, however. The author has improved over time and has painted a really interesting world with colorful characters. If you have the patience, you will love the story development. Tryyyyy it!!!!!
Okay..not gonna lie..this novel deserve better and more attention than trash piece of garbage novels where the mc is just a fking rubbish rotten piece of mushroom. I like you author.. To make the mc strong is what makes the novel good..i like seeing a different type of wuxua novel where the arrogant young master is the mc and not the oooother way around..i like how mc trample all trash mortals with hhis finger.. I lilike how mc have a lot of strong loyal general where he can order them to do his task.. i fuking like mc with family that dotted on him and hhis family are fking strong.. what i dont fking like about other novels is that tthey keep making tthe same cliche starts where mc is super fuking dog feces weak piece of rodent weiner bone that get powers randomly but fking weak regardless..keep getting bullied and only to be saved by plot armors.. Also even thou there are soome novels where mc is fking strong.. I HATE THE FACT THAT THEY ARE TOO FKING LOWKEY WHICH LITERALLY MADE THE MC OF THESE NOVELS KEEP HAVING SCENE WHERE PEOPLE THROW TRASH AT HIM, THIS MAKE ME FEEL LIKE KILLING THE FKING AUTHOR.. i hope that the authors who create these novels get brain cancer and die under my piss.
Finally finished this until chapter 1315 and I have to say that I am not disappointed.First, there is NO HAREM. A lot of girls like the MC but his heart has remained on one girl-Chu Qingcheng up until the end. His love for her is unconditional and different from his love for Ning'er or any feeling he has for any other female character. I am really happy about that since I absolutely can't stand harems.Second, I keep feeling that this author has achieved the dao and I have somehow become enlightened after reading this book. The author's thoughts are very profound and the book is very well thought out.Overall, I am sure that I will reread this book many times in the future.Thank you author for your hard work.
Let me start off by saying that i really like the premise of this story and the characters in it. the only issue i have is with the author making everything vague and even saying it will remain that way because this is basically a side story of her published book. Now i took a look at the book but it didnt interest me because the MC is a woman and i only like reading male lead stories. This is really sad because i really think this could have been one of the greats if it was just treated as its own book rather than a side story. There aRe decent grammatical and spelling errors which are off putting and the structure of the chapters suck at times since there are no inidcatuon of time passage or author notes at the end of the chapter like you see with other novels. Sadly im dropping this after 106 chapters. it was fun while it lasted.
The main character is extremely irritating to me and so are the side characters. There is barely any world building and the dialogue is super forced. If the interaction between characters wasn’t so forced it might help with how much I dislike the character.
A amazing take on eastern fantasy with a lack of cliches and a focus on building the main characters’ foundation as well as a mastery of world building.While the novel does become a little slow paced at the beginning, overall it is a enjoyable novel with likable, relatable characters and a main character you really connect to, root for and watch them grow as the story progresses.
I like the enthusiasm I felt from reading the synopsis. I could already sense the adventures in depth. A little spice here and there and a perfect book is birthed. Good job author!
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