too fast mate,the story develop too fast,just hope you could slow down the pace of the story,in just 3 chapter he got to admiral strength, it's too fastt
The narrative is well crafted, although it leaves the reader with much to imagine. The characters however, despite being fictional displays real emotions. The story so far is serious minded and intellectual.its a good work. Few punctuation errors and fewer dialogues. I look forward to more chapters.
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