The Chaos Dragon Prince

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I expected his sister to be more reliable and proactive rather than a background character. But apart from the start of the story and the constant reminder from the text that ”his sister is smart”, she always seems like a rabid dog that her brother needs to reign in from time to time.

Tl;dr. Not really bad but not really good. Don’t expect it to be amazing.

very interesting story the plot is amazing, the protagonist's personality is great i really liked it and her development is amazing and this is the best for this world, the harem honestly very interesting I really liked the personality of the heroines

The quality of the writig is really good. What is problematic is, that the author made the Mc so exceptional to the point that I see no chance of him having any long term alley and companions. They will fall so far behind that they wont be able to contribute after a few chapters. Thats very sad for an ptherwise good story.

Its a good read, but one thing keeps bugging me. The fact that he decided to go to the mortal world while with his insane awakened talent could have received the grooming of a top tier family of the higher worlds. Its the same as being born rich and then saying you want to become poor. He could have gotten the top tier resources of the higher world for free (because of his bloodline talent) but what does he do? Goes to the mortal world to fight for the scraps and bits of stuff that doesnt even hold a fraction of the value of the stuff he could have gotten from his family in the higher world. The author might have done it for the world building but there are other ways to do it. He could have received the resources of his family, but when he was on a journey, he was suprise attacked and fell to the mortal world involuntarily. He is forsaking top tier resources voluntarily. Although the going to the mortal world was a good move for world background, I must say that doing it voluntarily just makes the MC looks stupid. If he fell involuntarily, it would have been good and fine, but he fricking went there voluntarily. Even if he wants to go temper himself somewhere, he can do that anywhere else. He could challenge the geniuses of other famillies to temper himself or go on dangerous beast hunting journeys. Other than this irritating action, I would say the story is good.

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First of all, it's very well written though I would say it's a tad bit wordy in the beginning.

P.S We are both writing a similar types of story so I felt it would be cool to share some ideas.
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Best of luck mate

So a good novel (would've been more awesome ) but came to a sh it type cz of the braindeadness of the characters...

mc came from a modern world cz of some obsession...
he succeeded too...
then start as a generic cultivation novel setup... though a bit of twist (only a little ) ...
then both the mc and his sister take most of the shi t choices they can...

they can't cultivate but later can and get the op talent of all ...
yet they give up all the benefits of the powerful god level family to go t a lower world without any protection or anything just to have a f king struggle powerup...
which they could easily get from the family...
and they don't have any shi t knowledge of any details of anything in particular as well...
and the f king mc didn't even have his caution for this as well...

I mean this maybe a good novel base but the most f king sh it character setup for mc and sh it decision making...

well read at your own risk...