Beautifully written, the story itself is new from what I've read. A great storyline so far and the use of words are perfectly aligned. This book has great potential, definitely worth a vote.
One thing that I feel should be mentioned is that I have yet to feel any hunger nor any form of fatigue. My mouth feels a bit dry, but it is something easily fixed with a small glass of water. It is quite worrying though, that I don't feel hunger.
He watched as Mizuki stepped out behind Iruka and started talking "You really are an idiot Naruto, to think you would go to such lengths as betraying your village, just to bring me a forbidden scroll for me to give to Orochimaru-sama! Truly for the brat with that damned Kyuubi inside him, you would think you wouldn't be so useless!" Naruto did the best to adopt a look of shock and disbelief as Mizuki laughed at his face maniacally. "That's right Naruto! You are the Kyuubi who attacked Konoha 12 years ago!" Mizuki proclaimed as Naruto glared at him. Iruka widened his eyes as he turned to look at Naruto, and seemingly falling for Naruto's acting as well.
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