Although, i am giving this a high score. That is only because of my honesty regarding the parameters regarding this website rating system. This story has done something that has completely turned me off from further continuing. The protagonist receives a massive nerf of 5 years without any form of mana/ magic. No matter the reason he received this, i just rubs me the wrong way. Not to mention he is immediately challenged by the pursuer of his ex-fiancé and suffers a humiliating defeat and says this is a blessing in a disguise saying thanks to this he now realises his weak foundations. If it weren’t for this and maybe a bit with what happened with his master, i would have enjoyed reading this. So rather than continuing to read whilst feeling irritated, i am dropping this here. Good luck in your future writings, author.
Uhhmmm..In my opinion what I hate the most in novels is the repeating structure of arcs, like for example first arc MC meets an arrogant handsome powerful enemy then gets oppressed and he meets some difficulties then whaack! He defeats the enemy!! Then the same situation happens in the next arc, arrogant enemy,oppressed, defeating enemy and it becomes a loop.
What a piece of work😍😍😍I love how the author came out with a great idea👏👏👏This will surely be in my library to read. Highly recommended guys, you won't regret reading it❤️Kudos author more chapters to come🤗🤗🤗
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