THE BROKEN RIFT

29 March, Year 2314 of the Kronos calendar.

It took less than a minute for him to reach the source of the screaming; men and women, citizens of the city, rushed towards him, running from humans, demihumans, and a handful of nonhumans armed with stolen spears, knives, clubs, or their own, natural weapons.

Rock put his hand on the small of her back and led her inside the cabin. "This is my personal retreat. You are welcome here anytime."

Chrodeas immediately knew that it was Margaret's soul his father was holding.

Aku merasa subuh terlalu cepat datang.

My mouth opened but no words came out. I watched as buildings covered in snow zoomed by and Wonder City came into view.

I read the first twenty chapters and i really enjoyed it. I hope it continues like this. One thing I liked is that the author explains the skills complete with detail.I wish this will keep the story holes to a minimum. and I hope you continue like this author.I won't comment on the rest of the things for now I'll back when I've read them all.Sorry if there are any mistakes in the text my english is not very good.

It’s great so far but I would go back and check on the grammar. Several of the chapters call Astrea a female even though the synopsis explicitly states him as a man.

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