I am the ruler of the heavens and all realms. I came to the earth unintentionally. After seeing the talents of the earth, I felt that the earth has potential. So when I left, I created 500 sets of systems like in the novels you read., As long as like and reply 1, you can get the supreme system, and you don't lose money. Don't wait for the time to regret. So, what are you waiting for?
After chapter 16 this trail read novel went downhill very fast. Everything was just random. MC could have easily defeat those body gaurds but chose not to. lol and chose to get chased.
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All in all, a solid novel.There aren’t too many chapters so I can make a concrete review. However, from what I’ve read so far (30 chaps or so) I would say that it’s quite solid.The concept is fun, the dialogues are nice, and the world background is also slowly starting to take shape.That said, there are a couple of things that could improved.Firstly, not sure if it was just me, but at some point you used an emoji, and my laptop couldn’t read it, so I was confused for a bit.Could be just me, and it wasn’t really a big problem.The pacing is fine since the world is starting to take shape, so no problem there.Character is fine, but you what should be worked on more are side characters.They do feel alive, but it can be slightly improved. Just give them more unique quirks, and some motivation and goals to which they aspire to achieve.Anyhow, I really do like the story. Keep up the good work.(Original Review: Alekzi)
GTFO from my library you annoying scoundrel.1 Star I'm gonna spam 1 Star once each day until you begone from my sacred library.get outta here begone thot
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