So far I have read from chapter 1-50 the story has been progressing at a relatively fast rate however so far there are alot of things that could be improved. First of all the way the system does things is horrible imo. We have no information on the yearly and weekly quests at all, the exp system went from 1000 to 2000 to 9500 and then to 25000 which makes no sense at all. another problem I have with the novel is that it hides way too much information from the reader to the point where you don't really know what's going on. The last problem I have with the novel is that it keeps forgetting about quests and the rewards/punishments an example of this is when he gets completes a hidden quest and gets 10000 exp yet it does not add to his system at all and it was the same for another monthly quest which also had a bloodline upgrade.
The mc isn't some "know it all" person
And and one can see him develop his character as the story moves forward
He has the ability to love even though he grew up seeing everyone hates him
But one thing I don't understand is why would everyone treat him so bad they atleast can treat him like a human with no power
I don't know why the author decided to write a bloodline system novel when he obviously does not care about the bloodlines or abilities. While the novel in itself is good, the author constantly leaves out the descriptions of new skills and bloodlines and leaves us trying to pick up the pieces in our heads . Like he will kill some people and get their bloodline but he won't mention what they are for like 20 chapters.
When he kills like 20 criminals and then sits down to combine them the author shows like one combination and then just throws in a line like "Then I combined 4 other abilities" and then like never mentions it again. If your gonna write a system novel, you should put effort into showing us what bloodlines he collects and creates. You would think that would be a big part of something literally named the bloodline system. But I guess no, the author just jumps over crucial details for no real reason. Also when he combines abilities the system tells him how compatible they are, but no matter what it says the mc always combines it anyway.
Also For the first 200 chapters the mc like doesn't take other peoples bloodlines unless they attack him, like why can't he go out and hunt criminals or something. he can get unlimited bloodlines but he only takes like 4. WHY????
Don't get me started on the random abilities the system gives him like dash for no other reason than being a system novel. Would be a lot cooler if the mc got his abilities more from bloodlines then random system powerups. Again the author should just put more of a focus on the bloodlines. Why write a story focused on them then just gonna ignore them. Leaves me confused and disappointed.
Since I have read almost all available chapters, I am obligated to write a review.
Writing quality - I have no complains, there are no grammatical errors and flow is good(5 stars)
Update stability - 14chaps/week. (5stars)
Story development - so far it’s hard to judge, but considering all the mysteries the author has been giving us, it should be interesting. Until now, I like the way the story goes with the mc turning more into antihero, who still keeps his natural emotions.(5stars)
Character development - that’s the place author did a great a job. The reader can clearly see the change in mc’s character.(5 stars)
World background - Although I am still quite confused about the power system, but I am sure it will be explained more intently in the latter chaps(5 stars as well)
The story is great and I love it so far. It’s definitely better than 99% of the Wn books.
I'm thoroughly enjoying this book and hope it keeps updating and being just as enjoyable in the future. it was a bit rough at the start but as the story has continued you can see where the author is improving and slowing getting better at writing
There”s just a few words errors besides that I love . ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR ERROR
I'm usually a silent and low-key reader, but I just had to review this. It's so enthralling. Just recently joined Webnovel on recommendation and on recommendation I read your other novel and was so mesmerized. I saw u had another novel and decided to check this out. And Omg! Keep it up bro. I wanna see the end of this✌✌
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And and one can see him develop his character as the story moves forward
He has the ability to love even though he grew up seeing everyone hates him
But one thing I don't understand is why would everyone treat him so bad they atleast can treat him like a human with no power
When he kills like 20 criminals and then sits down to combine them the author shows like one combination and then just throws in a line like "Then I combined 4 other abilities" and then like never mentions it again. If your gonna write a system novel, you should put effort into showing us what bloodlines he collects and creates. You would think that would be a big part of something literally named the bloodline system. But I guess no, the author just jumps over crucial details for no real reason. Also when he combines abilities the system tells him how compatible they are, but no matter what it says the mc always combines it anyway.
Also For the first 200 chapters the mc like doesn't take other peoples bloodlines unless they attack him, like why can't he go out and hunt criminals or something. he can get unlimited bloodlines but he only takes like 4. WHY????
Don't get me started on the random abilities the system gives him like dash for no other reason than being a system novel. Would be a lot cooler if the mc got his abilities more from bloodlines then random system powerups. Again the author should just put more of a focus on the bloodlines. Why write a story focused on them then just gonna ignore them. Leaves me confused and disappointed.
Writing quality - I have no complains, there are no grammatical errors and flow is good(5 stars)
Update stability - 14chaps/week. (5stars)
Story development - so far it’s hard to judge, but considering all the mysteries the author has been giving us, it should be interesting. Until now, I like the way the story goes with the mc turning more into antihero, who still keeps his natural emotions.(5stars)
Character development - that’s the place author did a great a job. The reader can clearly see the change in mc’s character.(5 stars)
World background - Although I am still quite confused about the power system, but I am sure it will be explained more intently in the latter chaps(5 stars as well)
The story is great and I love it so far. It’s definitely better than 99% of the Wn books.
Btw the new cover is bomb.
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