Great book, fantastic world building, characters actions are congruent with their personalities.Story is evolving and expanding and overall has been refreshingly unpredictable.
hey there. I'm not sure if it's just the first chapters, the translation or whatsoever but the amount of gold is driving me crazy. he started with a certain amount but despite that he keeps spending a luxury amount even not having much revenue. It's really frustrating the math doesn't match lol π also this system is too unrealistic, I mean, you should at least set a certain amount of rules how stuff works and not poping up out of blue. nevertheless, Im enjoying the development, I'm used to skipping a lot of paragraphs in novels because of fillers and how authors often keeps slowly explaining and repeating and keeping the reader busy just to make some chapters. Wich is common and I don't blame bc I'd definitely do the same but it sucks nonetheless. anyway, your writing skills are clean and fine without regressive thoughts and it's really cool read such a novel despite the stuff I said.
1 star for making the novel so disgusting.I don't like the fact the Mc will start liking the girl even though she did harmful things to him. Even if he did it first but that doesn't mean they should do it to him.
Mika Elbar's adventure in this magical tale breaks away from typical hero stories. His down-to-earth nature makes him a likable main character, and the mysterious systen adds suspense to the plot. The famous magic academy, Loogam, adds excitement to Mika's journey. The fact that he lacks typical magical abilities or legendary relics makes his underdog story more compelling.Pretty good start to the story. Let's go Aspiring Mangakas community!
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