The Black Moon Saga

yoo why is this here when it's already translated to 1900+ chapters in other website? ¯_ಠ_ಠ_/¯......................

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Raw name: 通天仙路Status: 1360 Chapters (Completed)........................................................................................................

I almost died trying to read through waves of useless descriptions and confusing overly elborate great  walls of text. As some people commented, even gods will have trouble reading through this.

I found myself liking the MC much more starting from C3. The characterization feels humorous with an underlying serious tone. I have a personal preference for such atmospheres and the writing accentuates that chapter.Moving on to technical issues, I feel that the novel will improve with less usage of adverbs.I notice that you have a heavy inclination of using the word 'had' and using the phrase 'a small'. Perhaps some variation would help here?All the best!

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my only disappointment with this novel is the fact that its released so slowly. Borderline torture and agony cuz the novel is glorious. amazing world, lore, character design...i just wish this book gains more recognition cuz its seriously one of the best ones here....and I'm very stingy with where I spend my coins.

Boring and unrealistic