Good book and good selection of characters. I am not a big fan of the systems novels but this... seems intriguing to me for some reasons... Keep up the work, Author!
I like the general story idea, but there are way too many grammar mistakes, and it makes reading it a bit of a chore. plus I'm not too keen on zaya as a character already.
I didn't think i would find something like this accidentally!I'm really glad i came across this novel, It has a strong potential to rise and be one of the highest rated ones on Webnovel.Keep it up, seriously!And thank you for providing us with a piece of novel to entertain us β₯
The pacing is good, your characters are great especially Alexander, I love their design and development, the background is good and so are your descriptions and plot. Love the twists, overall a good story. Keep up the good work
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Notice that as this is my first book you may find some errors which I try to fix. the plot may not be the best yet but I sure promise to keep improving to your likings. expect two to three chapters update everyday. if you have any question i will reply to any and if you report an error i will fix it. thanks
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