Sigh.. i wanted to give this one a try due to the good reviews (i didnt look at the comment section yet) So i tried reading a bit and i only read half a chapter and couldn´t bear it to read it anymore. And thats coming from someone thats able to withstand reading mtl´s.The author makes quite alot of mistakes, about 5 in that half chapter.Not only that, i saw that the "protagonist" basicly added a few "!!!" to every sentence of his and his stupid decision at the start so i knew the mental age and eq of the mc and realized that he would annoy me, coming from someone that can live through young master cultivation novels, so i stopped reading this novel.Afterwards i saw the horrible top reviews from this novel and had no idea how this novel has such good reviews..
Love this story. Can't wait for more; although, I would really like to see them go back to the acadamy soon to visit. Of course they need to deal with the Nine Tails Sect first.
I love this book and would like to recommend this book to everyone. First the author has a good writing quality, it's unique, the plot is also wonderful. So i am telling everyone to checj this out and you won't be disappointed! I am awaiting your update, Author...really loved your book
By far one of the best stories I've read on this app while the story is a little rough at first by the time you get to chapters 50-60 it gets addictive Devon is an amazing main character and the background of the world is filled with mystery that makes the story stand out and the development is also very good and the updates are very consistent and sometimes the author is even nice enough to throw in some extras. I'm very excited to see what is in store in the future for Devon's adventure and all the mysteries to finally come to light. The only negative thing I can say about this story is the grammar mistakes that are made but that will get better with time. I heavily recommend this story to everyone and hope to see it to its end
Author’s shameless honest review :)I believe I am a good writer and note taker so their shouldn’t be many mistakes. But if you do find one pls leave a comment saying “found a mistake” no need to even give a reason. I will check it and fix it.The only thing I am worried about is how often I can post. I will try my best to do 1 ch a day. But problems may occur.I am very proud of the world I have created. It will have basic elements you see in system novels. But I dont think that’s bad as basic are basic for a reason. For example I love military arks.I have planned out the major plots of the story and I find it incredibly beautiful. My favorite books are Lord of myteries, Super gene, Castle of black iron,Legendary moonlight sculptor, and Supramcy games.I have taken inspiration from these and hundreds of other books I have read.
The start is good but, the emotional aspect feels flat.Conveying the emotions at the start of novel can be a bit tough but, it's a bit more flat.The story is good but the time gapes aren't separated properly.When the girl is killed at the start, I can't connect to them.You can use some more spacing in paragraphs.Ultimately... it's good.The syatem is elaborate and very interesting.A good read for now.
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