So the MC is a lazy character who does not want to do anything, mainly because his system requires it. First he transmigrates to this powerful family and works hard until he is tested to have trash talent. At that point he thinks about his family and realizes that there really is no point in him working hard as his family is one of the most powerful in the world. This unlocks his system. It offers him rewards as long as he keeps being lazy. This being the case and with a very supportive family who does not cast him out for poor talent, he does just what the system requires for his most optimal cultivation. Later his family gets into trouble and is attacked by 2+1 of the other top level families in the world. At this point he has been lazy for 10 years which change the character of anyone. At first he does not realize there is a problem as he does not keep track of things. When combat breaks out he realizes that his family is under attack. At this point he monitors the situation hoping that he does not need to take action as that would expose his top of the world cultivation. This is fairly natural as he has been lazy for 10 years. But with the love and care he has received from his family he first tries to act as a leader to protect the family without exposing himself. Then he makes a move under the guise of a talisman given to him by his father. Finally when the 3rd family decides to join in to attack his family and those who are the backbone of the family are in danger he finally takes action to save them which also exposes his cultivation.This is a very fast paced story especially to start with. It starts with him discovering his talent then the system unlocking and then a 10 year time-skip. The story was actually better than most of the reviews suggested, mainly because the MC follows a natural progression based on habit.
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A beautifully written story. To be honest, my intention was to read a few chapters but I read more than twenty (and will continue) with great pleasure, even though I am not a fan of fantasy. You pay attention to how you write. Your main character is an expressive, strong personality, the story is captivating. I have no doubts that you can write. Whish you endless inspiration!
These chapters keep getting better and better! I am so eager to continue the story as you release more. I can not imagine being The Operator in this very merciless world.
I like the idea of a new Touya with the quirk of his mom. I like fanfictions like this because it breaths in a new feeling and shows new developments in the future.It is also slow for my taste but is not boring. I am looking forward for more...Keep up the great work author san!!
The story is good and the character development is passable, the world background is acceptable. The only glaring thing I can say that annoys me are the UNFORGIVABLE GRAMMAR MISTAKES that are too numerous to ignore and enjoy the story!I'm sorry I tried to push on with his novel but I can't simply ignore bad grammar! And it doesn't seem to be getting better with newer chapters!
its not good.mc is :passivnaiv weak (despite having high stats)acts and thinks like a Woman( He was Male...)lets Other ppl disrespect her way to many TimesStory is slow Voyeur no common sense stats dont Matter since the start uselessacts like a dense protag and thinks like one.
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