First and foremost, the plot was riddled with repetition. It felt like I was reading the same scenes over and over again, with only minor variations to the dialogue or setting. As a result, the story failed to maintain my interest, and I found myself skimming through pages just to get to something new.Another major issue was the lack of creativity in the writing. The author relied heavily on tired tropes and clichés, and the characters felt flat and uninspired. It was particularly frustrating to see the main protagonist and heroine constantly referred to as "handsome" and "beautiful" without any real depth or nuance to their personalities.But perhaps the most frustrating aspect of the book was the confusing world development. The author seemed to have a lot of interesting ideas, but failed to fully flesh them out or connect them in a meaningful way. As a result, I found myself struggling to keep track of the various factions and their motivations, and ultimately felt disconnected from the story as a whole.All in all, while the book had its moments, the issues with plot repetition, lack of creativity, character design, and world development left me feeling disappointed and unsatisfied. I wouldn't recommend this book to others, and can only hope that the author will take these criticisms to heart in their future writing.
A typical world with potals and invading creatures. That's not really interesting. Nor is the system the MC has. The plot itself is reasonably interesting though. Grammar is DOGSHIT. Not really smooth to read. Got some mixed feelings about this one. There are certainly better novels of this setting and genre like "World's Best Martial Artist"
Somehow, the MC reminds me of Steamed Bun Invasion. Whom at the both ends of extreme, a PRO yet a NOOB. A pro in mechanics (character control) and a noob in game technicalities (logistics, utilization of in-game items and other stuff)
The initial chapters are crafted with expertise showing MC's ability to think carefully and smart, as he choses the other option instead of usual baby phase to be reborn. The pace is moderate and grammar is decent, talking about the theme/genre I seriously think author knows what they are doing with it! Good luck with WSA! [~aysel]
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I find this story again, but the interest in the story does not disappear. Author keep going! And so, I read this work so, I know what happens next, only if the author does not change the story a little?
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