I'm fairly new to writing novels, so there may be mistakes or inconsistencies that I haven't noticed. But I'm doing my best to improve as I go. If you have any questions about the story, feel free to ask, and don't hesitate to share any feedback you might have. Constructive criticism will really help me grow. Thank you in advance for your interest
WOW, this novel is too perfect. The writing quality is excellent, and the plot seems to be well arranged it's almost too good to be true, but here it is, it's not every day you would find a perfect villain novel with reasons and to think I'm just at the 4th chapter hohoho how exciting 😀 😊 😄 really I'm loving this already i would've loved to explain more of my reasons for liking this but I'm not a fan of writing too much haha
Just started this story a few days ago and have to say, it's overall pretty good. Starting off with the merits would obviously include the fact the the MC is a villian so if you're looking for that, you'll get it here, the power system in the story has quite a bit of potential to be pretty interesting if the author goes more into it and the side characters at least by ch 31 so far seem to be interesting enough and they're not just useless backround characters.
Though it does have it's demerits, one of which would include the story pace being a bit too fast at least earlier in the novel and due to that some of the formed character relationships in the story seem a bit abrupt and out of place for a bit. Also the fact the at least as far as i've read (chapter 31), the first few numbered chapters can nearly be skipped with the only real relavance they've had in the sotry being explaing the MC's personality a bit.
Though overall it's a pretty good novel so far. But i'll have to keep reading to see if it gets any better in the future as it does a some potential.
All this prince, empire and vex stuff reminds me of HxH. I think it would be good to add more characters. It was fun to read, keep writing. this book has potential.
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Though it does have it's demerits, one of which would include the story pace being a bit too fast at least earlier in the novel and due to that some of the formed character relationships in the story seem a bit abrupt and out of place for a bit. Also the fact the at least as far as i've read (chapter 31), the first few numbered chapters can nearly be skipped with the only real relavance they've had in the sotry being explaing the MC's personality a bit.
Though overall it's a pretty good novel so far. But i'll have to keep reading to see if it gets any better in the future as it does a some potential.