Ch19 - It's slow and feels super dry MC - I want to relate to this guy.....working a shitty job with an education background that could have got him something better, whilst surrounded by shitty colleagues but the Author just makes him come off like I'm meant to despise him.MC background - Has parents in the village, Has two Uni degrees, doesn't know martial arts - Yet author will always remind you of his degrees and tell you that he knew how to fight and he doesn't carry a umbrella cos he's a real MAN. World background - Gym, gym, gym gym, dorm and a abandoned factory. Side characters - His best friend has the most depth, Id like to see a story on him and his messed up relationship with his wife.
good novel, no faceslapping or arrogance, a logical mc with pretty new skills, and a different class change concept, all in all a good amount of potential
Omg this is an awesome book filled with fun and double worlds make it more fun. Between real world and vr world, it'll make one major interesting book. It's a must read. Good vampires rule!
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This might be my favorite novel that I've read on this platform. The writing quality is very well done, characters have personality and life to them, the plot and setting is very interesting, and is all around fun to read.The main character is incredibly well written, and the contrast between his new life and what he was before is so fun to see, along with how that causes him to react to the world around him. The other characters also seem well thought out, and the dynamic between him and his sister is great.Very few grammatical errors, and overall an amazing book!
this girl no other than maria, after ton of question from her club member that make her confused, she now know and see the forum by herself, shen alson confused,how come she so bold huging some one she never know, but after think again maybe its because she was happy because the cause of her ill omen was gone, she fell her life so gloom because the curse, she almost had nighmare every night, feel slugist and almost wake up full of vatigue, and make her dont want to go school and sudenly unknow boy came and help her, she fell like she was princess and been rescued by a knight,and after that when she remember petter she sundenly feel shy and blushing,after she back she geting bath and goes to her room and see the forum almost for one hour, she watching the recording again and again, and make her mad at some poin because petter like blok of wood and dint have any reaction when they hug, then she sudenly laugh because remember petter blusing face and stif face, she enjoi her time alone in her room until a knocking door sound wake her from her imagination time
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