It already have 680000 votes. are you going to release the novel soon? I'm tire of all the fighting harem romance and please no more cooking. Just give me the case to crack and criminal to chase I'll be in 9th heaven. Horror and the phyco like the radio novel is just not my type.
Interesting introduction and well-built world, even the blurb is catchy too, I'm already curious about the cultivators Great work author, I'm rooting for you.🙌🙌
So let’s review this story, I’ll be honest the story ain’t exactly groundbreaking in any way, however I still do enjoy it a bit. My main problems with the story mostly comes from the lack of editer, I’m not sure if it’s just me, but I feel the stories writing feels incredibly hectic at points, not in a fast paste way, but just jumping really quickly between various actionsThe characters are shockingly more fleshed out than your typical wuxia novel which is honestly surprising to me so kudos to you on that Game mechanics are iffy at best and awful at worst, I generally dislike the perma death game thing that a few novels have, xp distribution is also a bit questionable. I feel like author could have benefitted from just making it a system novel with a gate system like “super gene”My best suggestion to you author would be find a friend you trust to give an honest opinion and make him proof read it a little bit
The idea is good, but the story has no realism at all. I advice those more than 14 years old not to read it as they risk being bored to death. Author should know the differences between a novel and a story for kids.
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