The Ascendants: Early Years

In the shattered ruins, Belle asks in a low voice, "Who are they?"

-Deku Turn around-Deku did so and his legs were wide open. Katsuki saw everything and he was ashamed.

He walked into a room that the humans call a "bathroom" or a "restroom

Waktupun berlalu tidak terasa waktu menunjukan jam 23.00 dimana semua pegawai bersiap-siap berkemas untuk menutup cafe&resto ini, sedangkan aku berkutik didapur membersihkan semua yang ada didapur dari mengelap meja, kompor hingga membersihkan lantai,

the start of the novel looks very promising, characters feel alive and whilst the inspiration for the sisters come from the already existing warcraft universe they don't feel like they have been copy pasted, but integrated into the universe in which they have been inserted. I look forward to where author decides to lead the story and I wish to see Lord Othmar Garithos as a second ultra racist.

Fantastic first chapter, got me instantly hooked. You can really tell a lot of thought goes into the novel as worldbuilding was great. Writing style is definitely up my ally!Great job!