The writing is very interesting and makes me really look forward to the upcoming developments. The world-building is detailed, too. Keep it up! I hope you continue to improve and succeed!
I would like to say that short stories format are usually my favourite. The MC is someone I wouldn't typically enjoy because we established his character but after the guardian tell him his role, he immediately does it without really thinking about it. I may sound too critical but I am honestly enjoying myself.
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