A very good novel. I don't know what else to say. Love the mc. He is not your typical mc. Love the fact that the mc depends on his own power and not the system.
Your book only has a few chapters but after reading them i could tell your story has a lot of potential, the background is great and your writing is good and very simple which makes it quite easy to understand and i cannot wait to see the adventures they go on and i will be looking forward for more updates, hurry and give a chap author, good wrk.
Sometimes words are missing, it feels rushed and careless.The story starts good and stays that way until ca. chapter 35 or 40, not sure.Then fights will take multiple chapters and there will be only fights, no story.Bored I stopped reading.
great novel overall!
personally I was able to enjoy it for its entirely for the past 3 days.
it was great story development and explanation of powers.
though I did see a large drop in story development at 295-304 it seems that the story was rushed to finish pretty fast and the ending left me unsatisfied.
sucks but I loved it beforehand.
This story is a hidden gem .I really like it .The cat is cute .Want to own a cat now hehe . Wish both the cat and its caretaker a good adventure . Keep it up and update more !
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personally I was able to enjoy it for its entirely for the past 3 days.
it was great story development and explanation of powers.
though I did see a large drop in story development at 295-304 it seems that the story was rushed to finish pretty fast and the ending left me unsatisfied.
sucks but I loved it beforehand.
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