Hey guys, shameless author here.
What to expect before reading this novel:
1. it will be a mix of dark and light theme. I'm hoping to focus a bit on the light theme aspect than the dark theme aspect.
2. It wont be generic and only a handful of tropes will be implemented.
3. Its a non-human mc. So, humans won't be the main focus.
4. The mc's original world(earth) is a parallel world of earth. Historical and mythological themes will be implemented. So, if i get certain facts wrong, tell me.
5. I would yall to not be shy and leave your thoughts in the section below.
6. PLEASE VOTE!! I NEED IT
Overall the writing quality is decent and simplistic.
Easy on the eyes and I'm not forcing myself to understand.
I can tell the development is gonna be good for this one here but instead of telling what the story is gonna be about in the authors comment just let the flow happen and allow the story to take place instead of forcing what it's gonna be about. The readers are gonna want to figure it out for themselves.
I'd say that's my one issue thus far so keep up the splendid writing my friend!
Its a really good story, i love how they describe how magic works and the different kinds of magic that exists. It helped gain enlightenment and increase my understanding of magic[img=recommend]
Hello there.
As the author, I'm obliged to give a review halfway through. This review is coming late since I already passed the halfway mark of my novel.
Now, Now. lemme get to the actual review.
As the author, I wrote while viewing my story as having no flaws, but I do admit my novel does have some flaws that can only be seen from the reader's side. So, it is prolly up to you to decide what those flaws are.
My good points(this is something that can be verified by other readers)
1. First and foremost, I'm deeply proud of my world-building. It is certainly on another level(okay, maybe this is self-love). My lores are something that I can confidently brag about. Moreover, I make sure to minimize my lore-drops since I can barely retain many lores in my mind without checking back on my gdoc. This style of lore-dropping was something I developed over many chapters
2. My characters. While it may be argued that I have a small cast of characters, each of them is impactful to the story. They have motivations that drive their side of the story and not all of them have a happy ending.
- Volume 1 featured only about a handful of characters. Of course, there were a lot of minor characters
- Volume 2 expanded my list of characters marginally
- Volume 3 involves my MC venturing into the human world so it is expected that I would have a lot of characters
3. Story Development: I took inspiration from many novels and implemented my take on non-human stories. If I were to give an accurate synopsis, it would simply be, 'The story about Reve's journey and the larger world'.
I tend to stay away from regular troupes but that's because I'm viewing things from a logical side. Not all my characters fight. Not all opponents can be considered villains. Not everyone is evil and good.
Also, the story is progressive. I think, too progressive. Each consecutive volume builds on the final plot.
Stability of Update: I can boast of updating 2 chaps per day throughout the month of February.
Writing Quality: my writing quality is better than average. Some chapters are superb and while some are just normal. This reflects on my mood when writing since I write better when I'm not rushed to finished the chapter.
After everything, it is safe to say that the Arcadia System is a must read for those that love fantasy.
Interesting premise here. The cat being the main character was a bit unexpected. The chapters were very confusing. Who is who? Character introduction was not proper, and was very confusing in the first chapter. But, the system idea is fine, and different from what i saw before.
This is a good one, a system that is innocent lol so far the writing is clean and decent, it's actually good to read and quite enjoyable one at that since its arcadia (innocent)...
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What to expect before reading this novel:
1. it will be a mix of dark and light theme. I'm hoping to focus a bit on the light theme aspect than the dark theme aspect.
2. It wont be generic and only a handful of tropes will be implemented.
3. Its a non-human mc. So, humans won't be the main focus.
4. The mc's original world(earth) is a parallel world of earth. Historical and mythological themes will be implemented. So, if i get certain facts wrong, tell me.
5. I would yall to not be shy and leave your thoughts in the section below.
6. PLEASE VOTE!! I NEED IT
Easy on the eyes and I'm not forcing myself to understand.
I can tell the development is gonna be good for this one here but instead of telling what the story is gonna be about in the authors comment just let the flow happen and allow the story to take place instead of forcing what it's gonna be about. The readers are gonna want to figure it out for themselves.
I'd say that's my one issue thus far so keep up the splendid writing my friend!
As the author, I'm obliged to give a review halfway through. This review is coming late since I already passed the halfway mark of my novel.
Now, Now. lemme get to the actual review.
As the author, I wrote while viewing my story as having no flaws, but I do admit my novel does have some flaws that can only be seen from the reader's side. So, it is prolly up to you to decide what those flaws are.
My good points(this is something that can be verified by other readers)
1. First and foremost, I'm deeply proud of my world-building. It is certainly on another level(okay, maybe this is self-love). My lores are something that I can confidently brag about. Moreover, I make sure to minimize my lore-drops since I can barely retain many lores in my mind without checking back on my gdoc. This style of lore-dropping was something I developed over many chapters
2. My characters. While it may be argued that I have a small cast of characters, each of them is impactful to the story. They have motivations that drive their side of the story and not all of them have a happy ending.
- Volume 1 featured only about a handful of characters. Of course, there were a lot of minor characters
- Volume 2 expanded my list of characters marginally
- Volume 3 involves my MC venturing into the human world so it is expected that I would have a lot of characters
3. Story Development: I took inspiration from many novels and implemented my take on non-human stories. If I were to give an accurate synopsis, it would simply be, 'The story about Reve's journey and the larger world'.
I tend to stay away from regular troupes but that's because I'm viewing things from a logical side. Not all my characters fight. Not all opponents can be considered villains. Not everyone is evil and good.
Also, the story is progressive. I think, too progressive. Each consecutive volume builds on the final plot.
Stability of Update: I can boast of updating 2 chaps per day throughout the month of February.
Writing Quality: my writing quality is better than average. Some chapters are superb and while some are just normal. This reflects on my mood when writing since I write better when I'm not rushed to finished the chapter.
After everything, it is safe to say that the Arcadia System is a must read for those that love fantasy.