Great story so far but will he be bald forever? At this point he is still experimenting with his new found powers and there is a possible love interest.
Although it's imaginative(?) and has a bunch of positive reviews(possible fabricated), the grammar is horrible and the story development is forced and unnatural. I really tried hard enjoying the first few dozen chapters but they are too short, unentertaining and it seems like it's written by a fourth grade student. It would take a skilled editor to really improve it to readership standards. Most of the paragraphs contain sentences that are mostly filler words, irrelevant exposition and runoff sentences. The chapters are extremely short, mediocre and has a substandard quality. In my opinion, this novel doesn't deserve any of the positive phrases in its reviews. I hope the author can improve its chapters and make it more palatable. Until then, I can only give this a low score to offset the other biased reviews here so future readers won't get scammed into reading this.
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oh. ... author kun u back with another story. Good good. .I just hope you don't torture poor xin as much as you did to poor aryan. Well I read initial chapters and I am impressed. You have improved a lot. Nice introduction... ... .keep up the good work .
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