The Alchemist Back Hurts Today Too...

The novel started off very splendidly, though it dropped hard after the halfway point. Suddenly the focus shifted from the mc to some other reincarnator and mc's redundant escapades unrelated to the main plot.

liked it, want more, no other opinion accepted. really appreciated. jaa ne~ 😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶

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Story is okay  ...but it could have been better ..there are several loopholes ....and majority of scences seem incomplete.....🤔😎 to me.....hope u understand.

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"It resembles the energy I possess when I am covered by my mark of curse" - Indra thought as he placed himself just above the ground that radiated that energy. "Damn, just now that I was going to return with my nakamas, I find this," continued Indra complaining.

Look like I have successfully being born. I kinda happy that I being born as a boy, you know, because I Don't want to be genderbend, I prefer my gender the old way. When this thought run through me, I notice a  man wearing nice trime glass with an intelligent face, it just radiated knowledge, just look at it make me feel inferior instantly. I mean look at those calming, full of wisdom, blue eyes and those gold brown hair with somewhat decent body build, look like a

"What is... THAT, Master?" I asked as he gently grabbed my wrist in his hand.