Entry for #webnovelspirityawards2021
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It was the first VRMMORPG that successfully operated in the other world which was mostly known as the "VR World." It allowed the people to restarts their life to could escape from the inevitable change of the real world.
"Yumiko Gritz" our protagonist that suffered from Paraplegia after he fought in the Taekwondo World Cup. His opponent "Drake" Schemed to brutally assault him, so he couldn't back again inside the ring.
Her sister "Amiya Gritz" his a supportive sister also that the person who Introduced a game to him Where he could use his limbs without any problems.
Living in another world beyond your expectations, it possible to change your perception in the real world? Let's join in my journey to become the greatest adventurer in the VR World.
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VR World, Solo-Adventurer, War, Romance, Dungeon, Monsters, Romance?, Magic world.
Photo, not mine. I just found it on google.
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The chapters are nice and long, and full of great descriptive detail that makes this story a pleasure to read. I love the plot, especially with the idea of restarting a life after a tragedy has occurred. The characters are well fleshed out, though I would maybe like to see a bit more detail in their personality here and there.
I think the one thing the author needs to work on is being careful not to switch tenses. There were several occasions that the tenses shifted, and a few grammatical errors, but these can easily be fixed.
Great work author
first of all, I don't have much vocabulary so some words are repeated, but I guarantee you that I already made each arc of the story. I admitted that there are some grammatical issues, but don't blame me English is not my native language hahaha! I will try to fix it as soon as possible.
About Drake? All question has the answer, so stay tuned.
To the readers, read my work I hope you enjoy it, I'm really glad this is the reason why I keep writing, thank you!