An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
Although I am not a sci-fi fan, your story is really immersive. When I started reading the first chapter, I never thought I would be be hooked up with this story.
I am going to hang on and read further chapters.
This story is very well written and perfectly paced.
Although there are some info dump like in chp 5, but it is an essential part of the story to understand the characters and the story flow.
The character design and world setting is topnotch.
Overall this is a good read.
Good work author. :)
Hi. Ur sci-fi story is interesting and it's descriptive which makes me read the next, next chapter. I nearly going to finish till 12chapters and I hope you will update soon : )
The plot is really good. I haven't read many sci fi books so I don't have much to compare this with but I liked the book :)
Also, there are many punctuation errors especially with your periods and commas so you should go through the book and fixed that.
Keep writing, author!
Interesting story, so was the character. It was actually more interesting for me to read this novel than usual because I have also written a novel where the MC is extremely OP at the start but the setting was different.
Nice book. If you are a sci-fi fan like i am then please read this book. I quite liked the fact that this book has a rich section of vocabulary and I found no grammatical errors. Overall it is amazing.
Wow, just wow!! This is an amazing read. It is really different from the ones I have read before. You have done a great job author! Highly recommended book!
The second I read your story's synopsis, I'm all like, "Hmm. Story about kings? As in royals? That should be interesting."
When I read the book, it's like the words are exploding everywhere or something! Call me dramatic, but i'm totally loving this book of yours. It has some freshness which is great as well. I'm still reading so,,,yeh, i'm gonna go and do that. I hope that you publish more chapters soon though.
Good luck!
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I am going to hang on and read further chapters.
This story is very well written and perfectly paced.
Although there are some info dump like in chp 5, but it is an essential part of the story to understand the characters and the story flow.
The character design and world setting is topnotch.
Overall this is a good read.
Good work author. :)
Also, there are many punctuation errors especially with your periods and commas so you should go through the book and fixed that.
Keep writing, author!
When I read the book, it's like the words are exploding everywhere or something! Call me dramatic, but i'm totally loving this book of yours. It has some freshness which is great as well. I'm still reading so,,,yeh, i'm gonna go and do that. I hope that you publish more chapters soon though.
Good luck!
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