Qidian for fucks sake take over Martial Peak or Great Demon King or at least increase TTNH or OEM releases. ........................................................ ............................ ............................
The sino**is is useless... I don't know what the story look like, but i hope it's gonna be well. And, why i think i never see this novel on the votes place?
First of all, this author seems to have a problem with women and everyone who isn't "asian" (probably means chinese). There's plenty derogatory remarks about women and ample statements how asia, asians or asian culture is the best and everyone else falls behind.
To some degree that's not exactly unusual for CNs but it's a bit too prevalent in this novel for my taste.
The Translation is decent. There are no glaring grammar or spelling mistakes. But there's also no regard for sentence structure or "reading flow". So while you won't have problems understanding the story, it is also not an enjoyable read.
The story is just bad though. Character design is about the only positive point I can find. Other character (than the MC) actually have their own personalities. They're not mindless puppets or empty dolls like you'll find in some other CNs. There's no "arrogant young master #123" and the characters aren't just stereotypes.
But the world building and story progression is beyond bad. The story is nothing but a "look how awesome I am" show for the MC and the world building makes no f*ing sense. Not to mention there are tons of plotholes.
For example: The MC chooses a humanoid Mecha in the virtual game world and everyone makes fun of him because of it, since the humanoid mecha has no armor. But then the MC goes on to oneshot everyone of his opponents anyway. So what exactly was the purpose of armor in the first place, if it doesn't protect against hits? And why would NO ONE ELSE get the idea "maybe dodging could work"?
Seriously. I was really enjoying this novel at first. But when you see the sane thing over and over and over again. It gets a bit boring. The plot progression is sooo slow even a snail moves faster than it. Author spends time mostly on irrelevanf stuff and stuff that actually matters gets skipped over. Am in chapter 200 and i havent seen any plot progression from chapter 50, it just reading d same **** over and over again. MC fights in virtual reality, MC wins, MC solves some science ****, he is a genius we get it, can we move on to the actual plot now, u said something about rebuilding an empire and nothing in the plot that has happened so far has even mentioned that instead they focus on irrelevant stuff like background characters we dont give two **** about. Seriously, start writing something that actually contributes to the plot and not something repetitive and boring
Oh gooood! have been waiting for this for a loooong time,I really liked this web novel but the translation speed is only 1 chapter per month sometimes its 2-3 months till it completely stop translating now I wish it will have a fast translation.
This novel had the right stuff to be great but fell short in the end. A lot of the plot ends up being forced and repetitive. Premise of being a war god but the story never really leaves battle academies. Finally the ending was horribly rushed. It's an okay read 5/10. As always this is just my own personal opinion so take it with a grain of salt. Happy reading everyone.
Most of this novel is filled with just mecha tournaments. Author introduced some quite interesting stuffs yet it's barely explored and feels like just a segue for another tournament.
The exact same problem can be found in "Martial Arts Master" even though the author is different.
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To some degree that's not exactly unusual for CNs but it's a bit too prevalent in this novel for my taste.
The Translation is decent. There are no glaring grammar or spelling mistakes. But there's also no regard for sentence structure or "reading flow". So while you won't have problems understanding the story, it is also not an enjoyable read.
The story is just bad though. Character design is about the only positive point I can find. Other character (than the MC) actually have their own personalities. They're not mindless puppets or empty dolls like you'll find in some other CNs. There's no "arrogant young master #123" and the characters aren't just stereotypes.
But the world building and story progression is beyond bad. The story is nothing but a "look how awesome I am" show for the MC and the world building makes no f*ing sense. Not to mention there are tons of plotholes.
For example: The MC chooses a humanoid Mecha in the virtual game world and everyone makes fun of him because of it, since the humanoid mecha has no armor. But then the MC goes on to oneshot everyone of his opponents anyway. So what exactly was the purpose of armor in the first place, if it doesn't protect against hits? And why would NO ONE ELSE get the idea "maybe dodging could work"?
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Most of this novel is filled with just mecha tournaments. Author introduced some quite interesting stuffs yet it's barely explored and feels like just a segue for another tournament.
The exact same problem can be found in "Martial Arts Master" even though the author is different.
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