the English and writing... is barely readable, you could but you need to have patience in rearranging them to make it manageable. Mistakes like comma, capital letters and redundancy are issues I just... sigh.other than the occasional commentary, there isn't much of a change and that's just a waste of time, as I could just watch the anime.the Character... there are a lot of plotholes like his psychology and pacing in character development, he didn't change and even if he did he just copy pace the mc. And not a good one at that.the System... god why... normally I have no problem but the pacing and redundancy is just an eyesore.
The concepts are good (Meaning, I liked it). First of all, I was kind of lost in the first half. The second half made more sense. At times it got a little boring, especially the info dump part of part one. but as I said, the concepts are good and I like cats. ( I have five grown-ass cats in my house.) I wish you good luck ahead.
The story,plot,setting,characters they are phenomenal.. but the writing quality is very bad. Pronouns, sentence construction, articles, nouns, etc are all wrong. Reading this type of quality is killing my own English but due to the brilliant story and exciting plot I can’t leave this story. Fix your grammar and you will find more people interested in your work..
I will just put five star for the hardwork I have put in this novel.First of all I am not a chinese, so there will be some very minor mistakes. I must warn you guys that the MC will be a very ruthless villian. His personality will be between chaotic evil to chaotic neutral.
too much contradiction, I was done with it recently, in that chapter he decided to share about the thaid knowlage and fight moreover he doesn't call the teacher immediately when someone strong come but waits and only call when they start to chase honestly speaking it's nothing realistic and good only frustrating
The Captain hopped off the railing, dodging the shuriken that Nichiren and Sakura had sent his way by sliding across the bridge and hopping onto the railing on the other side. The Captain stopped when Sakura and Nichiren ran out of ammo. "Just to be clear, he's going to be fine?"
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