Target to Lover

It’s super far between chapters and the number or privileged chapters is stupid, not worth waiting for or reading only 1 chapter a week or 2. Should not have any privileges not worth it at all

Disappointed with the ending, author seems to be abandoned it rather than finishing.

Su Chen is so cool!!! I hope I would have such a power and memory too!!! Just to past my exams. I wish to see more about him and his girlfriend. Love his mother too!!! Cute lady!!! 😍😍

This is the first WN I’ve read on this app and I’ve read around 50 other WN’s inbetween this WN and the review (I used other sites to read WN’s until I actually made an account), so my memory might be a bit hazy in terms of story development and world background.Writing Quality: 3.7/5 If I was the author I’d use a broader range of vocabulary, be more descriptive (quantity), and just have a detailed description (quality) if things like the surroundings, fights, etc.Writing Stability: 5/5 Not much to say here, 7-8 chapters a week consistently which is very good imo.Story Development: 3.2/5Some plot holes here and there but nothing too major to the point where it’s detrimental to the story. It’s still too early to comment on this since this WN feels like it’ll easily be over 1000 chapters. I just hope the pace doesnt skyrocket out of nowhere and just becomes like your average cultivation novel right before the typical “holy continent” arc.Character Design: 3.5/5It’s an odd mix of some characters are bland, some have an alright design, and some feel like actual humans. The MC has some dumb things about his personality like being overly paranoid of the system and his sponser. This category was originally going to be a 2.5/5, but after reading the recent chapters it looks like the huge main female cast might finally be getting some character development, so I decided to bump it to a 3.5/5. World Background: 3/5From what I’ve read so far this has the potential to be a 5/5 if the author plans ahead carefully and doesn’t rush the rest of the story. In general, we haven’t been told that much about the world and beyond it, but it’s clear that the author has plans to talk about everything more in depth later on in the story.This is my completely objective review so even though i gave it an overall rating of 3.6/5 that doesn’t mean that it wasn’t entertaining or that i didn’t enjoy it.When VC reaches the 550 chapter mark I’ll update this review and make it way more detailed and in-depth, but until then the review stays as is. I hope everyone that reads this has a good day, cya💯

This novel is a lot like SAO. The primary difference is, that in SAO the MC only had a beta play through the first few levels and was trapped in the game as soon as it went online for the masses. The MC here has a complete playthrough and is reincarnated in the game like dungeon defence.What I like about this novel is the proactive MC, that acts instead of reacting. He knows about the problems and goes right to the roots to cut them down and doesn't wait till the sh*t hits the fan.What I don't like is, that in every odd chapter the author has to remind the Reader, that the MC is more feminine and beautiful than the girls in this novel, so he will probably stay single 'till the end (or miraculously reunite with is dead twin sister and f*ck her lights out... no - there's no ****** tag...EDIT: there is an ****** tag on NU - and I only guessed (O.O))

the story has potential, but the bad translation/ Grammer/sentence structure puts me off immensely.

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The story is really tells  about the eternal love .... eternal considering revival of amorous scenes of lovers. The story also justified the rebirth of one of the lovers while one waits.... tor his reincarnation... They meet .... that's is it.