Tangled Lines

" No normal building closes the doors on its own." Shadow thought as she followed behind Max.

"Well," Cala, said as she sat next to me, "When we gave you to our doctor, he saw all the wounds you had and he examined your body... So we know, or at least have an idea of what happened to you." They knew. They knew what happened to me, or the jist of it. I stared into space and almost couldn't believe what I had said next,

"Can we succeed about this?" Sisters ask.

Only shooting stars

seem promising ...........................................................................................................................................

Step 1. EatStep 2. Eat moreStep 3 Evolve Step 4. Eat mora againStep 5. RepeatStep 6. ProfitStep 7. ?????????????Step 8. Become a god?

the character is ok. i guessbut overall i don't kn

This book is amazing! It got a likeable mc, the plot is interesting,good pace, good writing quality and great fight scenes. One small suggestion is to improve sentence structure in the early chapter