Pretty boring, switches all over the place. No foreshadowing of introductions, too many plot lines occurring at the same time.Nothing much to add besides this.
Surprisingly a good read, the progress is good it just that sometimes some grammar problems pop up once in a while.But the updating stability is horrible! And I hope this upward curve progression will stay.
Absolutely amazing start! Benoit is such an amazing MC and the story is unique in its own right. The pacing of the story is great and everything isn’t just thrown at you. Spelling grammar and pacing are exceptionally written and it draws you in and keeps you hooked!
First off, reading the synopsis already made me excited for the story and I have to say the story doesn't disappoint. Although it seems to start off slow, you are already intrigued about what's going to happen and about MC's character.The writing is simple yet fits the story perfectly. What I like a lot is the dialogue because it sounds quite natural, although I do have to say that author doesnt put comma or anything for the dialogues.However, the world-building shows great promise and the pace flows nicely with the story.An interesting and amazing read, everyone should pick up and start reading!
Lol the author is pretty much ignoring that has to do with stats and levels after tier 2...barely any stats are shown if ever and now at 699 even the stats of sss sword arent shown since we dont know the levels and stats of the characters either..it has become a cultivation novel with just mentioning the tiers...kinda disappointing for a system apocalypse. Also it seems system will be made into a villain in future..which is just sad..i had such high hopes when i started reading..at least the story seems interesting enough to continue i guess
"Since you are done. Than I'm going to tell you a little secret." I say while leaning in. Making her back away and bump into her desk. "You don't have him eating out of your palm. It's the other way. He might seem kind, but you have only seen his mask. Nothing else. So stop claiming things that are already someone else's." I start heading towards his office when her next words stopped me.
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