"No doubt," Ian echoed, thinking that this would be the first Christmas he had spent at home without any member of his own family with whom to celebrate.
Anna laughed bitterly "Compared to what they did to me, it's nothing Miss Chen. Plus, they took my mother's life and correct me if I'm wrong, you helped my stepmother to get rid of her."
Who was this? This isn't the Seyong I know, the Seyong I know is rude and grumpy and definitely would have hit on me by now. But this Seyong is sweet and gentle and he just apologised. I don't get it, is he bipolar?
<p>So it's starting, it's only August 20th and there are already rumors of people acting violently in the streets in different parts of the country, mainly in big cities such as New York, Chicago and so on. Some countries such as China and North Korea have already blocked off communication with the outside world. With everything starting to happen so quickly it makes me question everything and just hope that our preparations were enough, after all, i have never actually had to kill anything before. We made a great deal of progress and a few days ago I sent word to everybody to meet in their predetermined locations, I myself am currently in my home just outside of Atlanta with a now twenty person security detail.</p>
It's ROTK fanfic so I raised my hopes high. And actually, author seems to know his craft. What just irked me is the weird formatting of the story. Wrong punctuations and capitalization all over the story made it hard for me to focus on the plot. I don't care about wrong grammar or spelling, my brain is already too used to mtling Chinese stories so I don't have problems with wrong grammar/spelling. As long as I can understand the meaning, it's all okay. But in this novel, my problem is different. I always got distracted by the weird formatting. I'm not sure if that is part of author's style, but whenever I want to get immersed in the story but noticed so many distractions midway, I feel like murdering people. The feeling intensified the more I read the next chapters and see that the formatting is still the same.
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This light novel effectively piques the reader's interest. I would be grateful if the author could share the planned length of the novel and the inspiration behind its creation. The writing is quite impressive, particularly considering English may not be the author's first language. While there is room for improvement in certain areas, I am confident that Amaraz possesses the potential to achieve a storytelling quality comparable to "Shadow Slave".
Beautifully written and kept me engaged within the story every step of the way! It was a pleasure to read with a thrilling story line. Definitely worth a read.
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