Taking the Mafia to the Magic World

I was enjoying this until chapter 16. I only got to chapter 16 because i feel it was mislabeled and should include tragedy. everything else seems good and if you like that sort of thing then I'm sure you'll enjoy this. Unfortunately I find that unnecessary tragedy ruins my enjoyment of novels. stress and strife are needed but tragic encounters solely to make the mc understand how strong people are is not my cup of tea.

The writing, grammar wise, is fairly terrible. It’s all in passive voice, so everything sounds funny. It makes it less enjoyable to read. Honestly it seems to be on purpose to make the word coung longer. Even if English isn’t your first language, you have to actively try to sound like Yoda all the time. I think the wrong tense choice is also because of everything being in passive voice.

Grammar aside, the story is wonderful thus far. Interesting magic system and world development. It’s not one size fits all, you have X tiers of power with X subtiers. It seems different enough to stick out, but not unnecessarily complicated just to be different.

I thought the story was perfect until chapter 56, which is where you have to pay to continue reading, so I'll have to stop here because I don't have the money for that.                                 Sorry Author-Sama

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I think I can see where thr story is going and I love it. It is a new take on the genre and it is what I have been lookong for. The only critique (if you can even call it that

i enjoyed the story but when gun comming i'm out, idk why fantasy world must have gun, if this is story about scifi its ok, but sorry bro i cant continue.

so far at 70 chapters in this is really solid, good power structure, nothing over done, and everything even the magic has a sense realism, first 20 to 30 chapters was rather slow bit once he starts building the family things get  interesting real fast, and it seems like the author knows this sense he made it free till chapter 53, I recommend giving it a shot till the pay wall at least then see if you like it, but chances are if you get to it you won't want to stop

At first the novel will seem slow paced and the mc will be weak and pushed around by those who are many times stronger then him because the author didn’t want to make him op from the start, but after a good character development period the mc will start doing what needs to be done and that’s when the full potential of the novel will be shown, so if you haven’t reached chapter 270-280 just continue reading because around those chapter the real fun begins ✨✨

The title makes it sound like the whole gang got reincarnated, which would be pretty unique. Haven’t read it yet, but the synopsis reads like that isn’t the case here :(

Maybe you should take a break to get more chapters. huff

I've been wanting to read this for a while now, haven't started yet because of the harem tag, is the harem a big part of the story or does it just exist but is barely mentioned?

Somewhere in between.