Tainted dove | KV ✔

KiBiBiK's review series:One sentence review: A pretty interesting cheat power that gets ruined through boring repetition of the plot as well as uninteresting and unrelatable characters (And also boring and fake dialogues).Detailed review: An interesting cheat power that has tremendous potential in terms of treasure hunting. I had great hopes for the future but the story clearly showed its level of less than mediocrity from the beginning itself. I could think of tens of scenes and uses of this power straight out of my mind in a couple of seconds but the author decided to stick with 'storage' gambling. Just that. Repeat that. Repeat that. Repeat that.Did n't you get annoyed? Exactly that's my problem here. 60+ chapters done and the author is cycling the same thing again and again. And let me tell you, this thing is new and but not the coolest. (I believe 130+ is still the same thing)Is there a hook that makes you read the novel? NOIs there an interesting character or MC that makes you continue reading? NO. (Some might like the characters- but I find them dull)Another big problem is the unnecessary racial discrimination and slurs used. Just freaking unneeded. "Yellow" this. "Yellow" that. Seriously. You could do better.Logic: Somewhat works somewhere. But I find big loopholes everywhere in terms of modern legal system as well as personality. A foreign student who got enrolled in a 'Fake' university will be in the process of DEPORTATION. But the MC can do whatever he wants. Maybe, the author will touch that up later? who knows?It is illegal to work or earn money for someone with a Student Visa. This guy is making money and then publicizing it.Let's forget this assuming he is a US citizen or permanent resident. But he is clearly not American. A stranger who he just met is willing to invest money trusting him without questions? And even gives 60-40 share? Seriously? What year is this?Characters are too loud and dull. "Hey Buddy" hundred times. The usage of God in this novel is HORRIBLE and annoying. You are Cheating for God's sake and still say God loves me. Too lazy to write anything else..YawnI read this much leaving my brain locked up. Good luck.You might like it.ProsA unique modern settingAn interesting cheat powerConsAll the sentences above

3/3:1/1/1Translation is mediocre Updates are consistent Story dev is typical back in time **** which the goal to change Mc past mistakes nothing new from the other 100+ novels just like this oneChar and world dev same tropes as any other back in the past novels, had knowledge of the future to exploit and rich kids jelly about Mc stuff tries to steal fails and ends up making fool of one selfOver all 1.8 not original nor unique

Seshata has hit their groove early on in Humanity Online: Viren’s Refuge. Readers closely follow Erik Lieu in first person, present tense as he dives into the world’s first and greatest VRMMORPG. An elite gamer, his running narrative reveals him to be equal parts confident (bordering on arrogance) and vulnerable (humble enough to know when to laugh at himself). And readers will laugh! His self-aware, at times self-conscious, at times self-deprecating, cynicisms leave no one unscathed. His incisive wit (read: snark) dissects a well-planned world rich in detail, historical lore, and ripe with future potential. And not just gaming potential! The stakes are high in Viren’s Refuge with a sweetened pot provided by the games originator. And for Erik, making his way to the top is about more than just being the best — it’s personal, too. Action-packed cinematic sequences meld seamlessly with plot-turns and character exploits in chapters written so well they virtually read themselves aloud to you. This book is perfect for anyone who has ever sought the answer to - do video game Gods have a sense of humor? Or - what happens if the Chosen One loses his trousers? I can’t wait to find out, myself!

I hope this is as good as I expect it to be. Gonna be pretty disappointed if it isnt ngl. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Hmmm very interesting, haven't really seen this concept anywhere else. Keep up the good work author! Other than that is was a bit confusing in the beginning, I must say it has a unique taste to it

It's very well written and the characters are nice, but the best parts are the descriptive pieces which make the world come to life. I like the way the chapters are structured to give bits and pieces of information which just flow off into the next chapter really easily, but can be a little confusing at first. There's a lot of potential.

before I keep readingdid he kill his 5 year old sister

Good novel . i enjoyed reading it. there is no op ability and I like the chemistry between mc and first female lead(andy) ....