Systems and Magic

Hi!!! I love this Story so far!!!! How the story developed and how the character grows!! Although im still in chapter 20 i have a high expectations in this Story so im excited to tell this to my friend!!!! Keep the Translation!! Translator!!!!

very cute book                                                                                                                                               

While I may not be the best at this, I think its honestly a very good book to just relax and read with some snacks and a drink in a big comfy chair or your favorite reading spot for a long period of time. It does have some characteristics that at this point are common but it gives it A nice twist that makes it more interesting and even a little spicy depending on what your Interests are. Really hope this gets picked back up, waiting for another update!!!

World Background - 4 stars. The author does this quite well describing the location and settings.Writing quality - 5 stars. Other than some typos I have only seen one grammatical mistake in 50 chapters.Character design - 4 stars. The character's have been explored well most of them, well we at least have a basic understanding of all the charactersStability of updates - 5 stars. Don't know much new to this book I started with 50+ chapters to binge.Story development -5 stars. So far I've enjoyed how the stories been developing. The authors also pretty funny and interacts with the reader.

Exceptional writing, looking forward to the ongoing story and development of characters and settings. Will check back weekly for sure for updates.

I can't really say much, but it's one of the best I've read. If you like dark fantasy, it's something I recommend to you.Enjoy not every day you find a masterpiece of dark fantasy

Meanwhile, Xavier was speechless as he saw both parties staring at each other amidst the battlefield with no one moving at all.

And please be indulgent, it's not my language!