It starts with the cliché of someone hurting him and he can't do anything... are you dirty? Can such a wound be considered an attempted murder, and the police or the government do nothing? says he barely has money when he could have sued both the other guy's master and the one who attacked him. and then the cliché of playing the game without knowing what to do that his sister gave him starts, I've read many with the same script (literally the same) congratulations for your creativity
Bro the title of your story and the synopsis didn't do your story justice. I will be honest I was not very excited about reading a story about a kid sharing head space with a CIA Agent. I didn't know where you were going with this nor the fact that you would combine the two souls together to make a better whole. If I knew your story was anything like Jay Aslan I would have been more excited about reading it. I am ecstatic that I took a chance with your story and kind of angry that you didn't make you synopsis better lol. I could have missed a gem because of that. That all said thank you for a great story and I hope you keep up the good work.
MC is stupid & annoying which takes a lot away from the story. It becomes a lot lackluster in important scenarios. The world background is also lacking in details & the storytelling is confusing
I tried to make this novel well. Because this novel uses Google Translate, I beg you to take advantage of my mistakes in grammar that are not neat. I'm trying to be good and will continue to grow in the future. Please support me. Thank you very much.
the short chapter is indeed a problem but it looks and sounds interesting so that a good thing even then I will have to see how this will go. I will give you a 5-star review first before that though consider it a reward for making me interested if you want
This novel is an absolute masterpiece, captivating from the very first page to the last. The author’s storytelling prowess is evident in the richly developed characters and intricate plot. Every twist and turn kept me on the edge of my seat, making it impossible to put the book down. The prose is both eloquent and accessible, painting vivid pictures that draw you into the world the author has created.
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