System: Inherited

[Reviewed on: 26-09-2021]
[Reading status: 7th Chapter]
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[Strong points:]
- The first hook is in the synopsis 'eunuch mage' which leaves a whole room for imagination.
- The pace in initial 7 chapters is kind of slow but believe me you'll be soon immersed within the descriptive style of the author.
- A reasonable amount of explanation is sprinkled throughout the chapters, with an utter emphasis on the development of the MC.
- The author did an immensely enjoyable part in turning the cliches upside down, the parents are supportive, siblings of the MC are teasing yet the bonding is there. However one brother sounds suspicious nonetheless. The master of the MC is determined to guide him too, hence you won't experience the typical chinese cultivation novel storyline.
- The narration is highly readable, with less-to-none mistakes (although I didn't spot any in 7 chapters) which makes the reading experience smooth.
- Everything flows within a vivid picture that the reader can imagine the whole scenario and surroundings effortlessly, I didn't face any trouble imagining and playing the descriptive combat with the beasts.
- However there's no hook in chapter 1 and 2 but the gradual process of MCs daily life and the preparation for the test is also interesting.
- Chapter 6 and 7 unlocks the spice of excitement when we see the MC getting his skills and awakening his aura and other abilities.
- And tbh I've never seen such combination of the skills and powers (or perhaps haven't read yet on WN) and thus this work was a good one to read.
- The verbal abuse and insult by the audience which MC received also shows us his desperation and hints back the reasons why he wants to leave the palace.
- Then next comes the system, which is 'passed down' to the MC by his father. Which itself was kinda weird thing to read, but in a good way. Since I wasn't expecting the system to arrive in that particular aspect.

[Weakness:]
- The descriptions of the characters regarding their hair, eyes, figure etc was kinda unnecessary. As a reader I skipped them and I believe most would also skip those paragraphs since we can't really register so many characters by crafting their physical forms in head.
- The title of the story of extremely bland which is a big deal I'd say, and since now I've read up to 7 chapters I'd conclude that it requires a change immediately. Title shoulde be catchy enough equally as synopsis or why would readers even bother to click on the book. Since synopsis appears after the cover and title.

[Note for future readers:]

Please give it a go upto 7 chapters at least before concluding anything about the book.

Thank you~

One of the things that make a good story is the character. And this novel has it. The interaction between the characters almost seems realistic--the author uses many interesting words to describe each of the dialogue. For the story development, it was slow pace in the early chaps but after that it'd pick up. Adventure and thrills wouls start to move around.  With a beautifully crafted English languague and creativity, I would recommend you to read this.

For the author, keep on writing. Story must be told.

Not a clue, just change the name to system inheritance or inherited system, also change that self drawn cover, probably turning ppl away by these two things

I read this novel back when it was still unlocked and stuff so I don’t remember much but it was pretty good, but is the author on a hiatus from the novel or did he drop it?

I only started this novel to get a free pass and I'm so glad I did it. Although I'm only on chapter 5 atm I think it has all the makings of a grand adventure. Keep up the great writing.

A strength is his inclusion of specifics about the strength growth and the beatsmen.
Most authors do not include hard operating numbers and advice in a narrative book.
He does and it is extremely useful information. .
I found those details are comparable in less words to books I have read devoted entirely to running the business.

He nails it on the head when talking about going the extra mile for your guests. His philosophy and stories reminded me of Nordstrom’s commitment to unexpected service, even when it is not even related to the core business.

Summary: Worth the read.

Noice

I love the world building and the interactions between the characters are beautifully described. The story development is also interesting, and I'm looking forward to how it will progress in the future. Keep it up, Author!