System Break

Really like story especially love plot and wish you success. Currently, the only problem is mistakes in sentences, such as using the same word twice when it is enough to do it once(like - You do you.).

I really wanted to write a good review, but I just suck at thinking of words that convey my thoughts.

So yeah... exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp. Currently on chapter 70 Very nice so far.

Till 20th chapter I liked the book very much definitely recommend it to others. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Great start

The novel is unfinished and at this point, I don't think it'll be finished.
The story was decent but nothing amazing.
Personally, I wouldn't spend my coins on this story.

My friend, do you fly away now?
To a world that abhors you and I?
All that awaits you is a somber morrow
No matter where the winds may blow
My friend, your desire
Is the bringer of life, the gift of the goddess
Even if the morrow is barren of promises
Nothing shall forestall my return

I couldn't find anything lacking in this novel everything is over the top
The mc has  a bold funny and strong character and not some stupid cold guy as  we see in most novels
Definitely worth reading