What happens when you have nothing to lose, so you agree to become a subject in a sketchy experiment.
What happens when this experiment ends up being a game and you're an alpha tester.
What if the game wasn't in a computer but (spoiler free)
What if the Alpha testers are helping create the system the game is based on.
I was a brash kid and after getting a war wound I became a bitter bastard. I was given a second chance at life because of something called a high qi-count. I could die, but it's all good cos my current situation sucks.
I am Benzhi and this is my story. PS I had nfi what I was in for.
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No shameless author review. I want the readers to have their say.
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Something about the Author.
Under my pen name Skully I have been writing online web serials since 2017.
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I fell in love with a couple of stories, TKA and Savage Divinity and thought I'd give it a try in mid 2017. My first story was Hardcore Qi Worlds which was published on Gravity Tales and Royal Road. One of only 2 or 3 originals on Gravity Tales.
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I felt like I made a lot of mistakes and there was a distinct lack of modern sci-fi so I started Daedalus in 2018. I published it on here under Skully_ and on Royal Road.
It's now on Amazon as 4 books and the 5th will come out this year.
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This year I'm writing a lot more than last year. I have Spiritmaster which will go on to Kindle Vella and Amazon. And System Break is designed for webnovel.
I plan to write 1,000 chapters for System Break before its completed and the major arcs are planned. At the 6 month mark I plan to have 380+ chapters.
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This one gets to the standards of pro American novels, edited and with good author who can drive the story with exciting adventures. Mixing Qi and Elves (I know they are not but...) inside Game like world is interesting concept I didn't find elsewhere. MC is likable black guy with good experience before getting to another world and doesn't dwell on "it's a game" mindset. I would like more engagement from side characters (elves) but that is really me being picky.
There are only two cons, occasional typos (very, very few) and that is doesn't have 700+ chaps already.
I come here after Phoenix Phire, which is of similar concept and I would recommend to everyone here hungry something like this.
Long story short; its good you should try it!
There’s a nice ratio of serious and lewd chapters, the characters are well-developed, serious thought went into the world design and organizations, and there’s a constant desire to read the next chapter.
There are the occasional word-choice errors (scoffed used in lieu of scarfed regarding food is one semi-frequent mistake), but they’re few and far between.
Anyways really recommend !!!
Keep up the good work
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Pacing is brilliant. Character development is really good, I have a very clear image of the characters and their personality. World background is hidden on purpose, its part of the mystery and is revealed slowly with chapter progression.
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The author turns standard tropes of classic fantasy races on their head. It's a very unique reading experience as he completely destroys the preconceived image of things.
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The author uses the adult content as a device to tell the story and its inkeeping with the characters. There's no forcing which is refreshing.
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I highly recommend you give it a try. Its better than most of the litrpg ive read on amazon.