the writing quality at the first page is not good, though the story line will keep you hooked i hope the author can improve on it.
oh and one thing to learned very late in my 3rd book was that always elaborate on the emotions of the Mc .
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Giving 5 stars as I like the characters a lot. however there a few duplicate chapters and some editing needed, that I hope the Author fixes. Otherwise it's a fun story so far
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oh and one thing to learned very late in my 3rd book was that always elaborate on the emotions of the Mc .