Sweet and Seductive! Addicted to Being Spoiled by My Ex-Uncle

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Nice work author, I shall praise you for the stark use of metaphors adding a matureness to your story. I absolutely love it.Just never drop your story, even if you do a chapter a week.

It's good for having a good time, but it falls short in many ways. The writing is very erratic. It constantly switches from first person to third person or worse, a combination of both. The characters behave in strange ways, it seems like they are all either completely against or completely in favor of the protagonist, there are never any gray areas. The protagonist is also strange. She always seems to apply morality to whatever suits her at the moment. He kills dozens of knights for invading, but then mourns the death of a couple of elves. Power levels are also in flux.Finally, I think the novel doesn't do a lot of the things it wants to do very well. There are basically no fights, the system basically doesn't exist. She has no problem running the kingdom where everyone adores her. Politics are very superficial. Then you have the merchant subplot. In short, it's fun, but you have to turn off your brain a little if you're even remotely critical.